I'm thinking just, taking out the whole chasing thing. The whole thing seems kinda disconnected, because of that.
maybe just the "dog" coming in, sniffs around, calls in the guy. They get to work, uploading the virus. Hears footsteps and, the getting away part is the same.
It seems weird, calling in the guy and running away from him later. We'll talk about it tmr in class probably, just
1 final tweak to it, and we should be able to carry on with the other stuff
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I kind of feel the same as Yeow, the purpose of the story is not that prominant. I think we shouldn't cut down the length, but have some acts which focus more towards destroying the rival products.
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